SENTENCE CORRECTING

1.I went skatin g down at the pond and three kids from my school were there. We all fell down. It happened again and then again for the third time.We started to lagh so much that our stomachs hurt.

2. I thought the lopsided game would never end.The score just kept getting worse and worse.

3.Martha thinks she is so cool. She is not cool to me.

4.Joe watched a video. His mom had bought for at store she worked at .

5.Susan loved to watch football and she would watch it every sunday on t.v. . Every saturday she would go to the local college football game and she would always wear the school colors.

The angry time

Last time I got mad that I remember was when I got arrested for some stupid stuff I did and getting arrested again sucked.I hate that feeling because all I could think of was my mom and my little sister. It sucked even more when I was locked up for a while and I did not like how they treated me there because I don't like to listen to anybody telling me what to do.

The shelter burned into flames and then it runbled down into ashes and sounded like a freight train and sucked at the air.

The shelter burst into flames, rumbled down, and sucked at the air and it sounded like a freight train.

The North American black bear is found only on this continent in association with forested landscapes. Scientists have identified 11 different subspecies of black bear, including the Kermode or spirit bear, in which about 1 bear in 10 is white or cream coloured. It is the unusually high occurrence of white bears in the population that makes the spirit bear unique, as white bears do occur very rarely in other populations of black bears in North America.

Where do spirit bears live?The spirit bear inhabits only one place on Earth: the central and north coast of British Columbia, Canada from about Rivers Inlet to Stewart.
Within this broad range of their occurrence, two genetic centres are recognized where white-phased individuals are more common, the Terrace-Nass-Hazelton area and the area centred on Princess Royal-Roderick & Pooley and Gribbell islands.
The areas around Terrace. B.C. have been heavily logged but bears there and their habitat are still in need of some protection.
The new 2006 spirit bear conservancy complex in the Princess Royal Island area will help protect the best intact areas on the B.C. coast. However, unless logging guidelines are significantly improved, most of the spirit bears' range outside of protected areas remains threatened by industrial forestry and other developments.thiss information ishttp://www.vws.org/project/spiritbear/about_bear/faq.html#2
A black spirit bear. There are both blackand white spirit bears

Anna went to the store beacause she needed milk.
Chris ate too much candy, so his stomach hurt.
Richard fell tired because he bought an energy drink.
Tesla ran after the bus because she woke up late.
I had to walk home because I missed the bus.
Ashley couldnt be around bees so she cant be around them.
I didnt trun in my homework, so I got a bad grade.
She had the flu, so she took some medicine to get better.

combining sentences

1. Janet directed the band and she also plays the drums.

2.Anthony and Jake are both fine writers.

3. Maria is a fast reader and she also just got done reading War and Peace.

4. T hat girl is a whizat at math and she also has a calculator in her hand.

This weekend i had a very good Thanksgiving I was with my family my mom, little sister and my uncle and his girlfriend,and also her kids we didnt eat no turkey but we had pizza instead and thats about it,it was kinda boring